How sweet, simple and to the point! This will also make an awesome Christmas gift to give to your sisters (and your parents) at Christmas!! I can see the tears flowing already! :) This video sure does make me wish I had a big sister. I am the oldest with a younger brother and sister. We have each other's backs and talk and visit each other (despite a lot of physical distance) pretty regularly but they would never make me a video! :) I don't think there is much you need to do to change this. You seemed to do a good job of working smarter, not harder! The best part was when you said they were your best friends at the end- thats when the tears will really be flowing at Christmas! Great job!
Your digital story made me think about how important family is One thing you might think about changing is the time spent on each image and the timing of the voice over. The best thing about your digital story is it is simple and easy to follow and very interesting. You truly do love your sisters!
A very heartfelt story which made me appreciate my own sisters. I liked the music, the pace, and the message. This is the first one I've watched, but it makes me proud to be a part of this class group!}
How sweet, simple and to the point! This will also make an awesome Christmas gift to give to your sisters (and your parents) at Christmas!! I can see the tears flowing already! :) This video sure does make me wish I had a big sister. I am the oldest with a younger brother and sister. We have each other's backs and talk and visit each other (despite a lot of physical distance) pretty regularly but they would never make me a video! :)
ReplyDeleteI don't think there is much you need to do to change this. You seemed to do a good job of working smarter, not harder! The best part was when you said they were your best friends at the end- thats when the tears will really be flowing at Christmas! Great job!
Your digital story made me think about how important family is
ReplyDeleteOne thing you might think about changing is the time spent on each image and the timing of the voice over.
The best thing about your digital story is it is simple and easy to follow and very interesting. You truly do love your sisters!
Thank you both very much!
ReplyDeleteA very heartfelt story which made me appreciate my own sisters. I liked the music, the pace, and the message. This is the first one I've watched, but it makes me proud to be a part of this class group!}
ReplyDeleteGreat story to share with your family and it made me think of my own siblings. I would only suggest tinkering with your pictures speed.
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